# Why so much synchronicity?

*The Urth list — 12 messages, 9 voices, 19 Aug 2006*

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### junk06 at amalar.com
*19 Aug 2006, 21:16*

I'm rereading (started with BOTNS this time, then back to Shadow).

I've read many theories on Severian's genealogy. Assuming all (or even 
most) of those theories are true, why does Severian end up meeting 
practically every single relative he has? He almost can't walk down a 
street without running into one.

It's not just relatives. Even as the narrator keeps mentioning how 
incomprehensibly populated Nessus is, he keeps running into people he 
knows. He even runs into people he knows out in the wilderness sometimes. 
Synchronicity abounds.

Meets man in library, meets same man years later racing down a street.
Meets man digging a grave, meets same man years later in a boat.
Has childhood friend, meets him again years later in the middle of a vast 
ocean.
Meets man in library, meets him years later in another library across the 
country.
etc etc etc for probably a dozen more examples

Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone mentioned recently. Anyone 
have theories as to why so many coincidences fill the series?

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### Dan'l Danehy-Oakes
*19 Aug 2006, 21:39 · in reply to junk06 at amalar.com*

> On 8/19/06, junk06 at amalar.com <junk06 at amalar.com> wrote:
> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone mentioned recently.
> Anyone have theories as to why so many coincidences fill the series?

I have two.

1. I'm pretty sure Wolfe is an admirer of Dickens. Dickens's plots are
utterly coincidence-driven. (E.g., the fellow who catches Oliver, but
not the Dodger, turns out to be his grandfather...) This doesn't bother
his fans.

2. These are all signs of Divine Providence (or the guidance of the
Hier*s, aqastors, etc.) to make sure that Severian fulfills that destiny
(of which he already had some presentiment)

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### Jesper Svedberg
*19 Aug 2006, 21:56 · in reply to Dan'l Danehy-Oakes*

2006/8/19, Dan'l Danehy-Oakes <danldo at gmail.com>:

> On 8/19/06, junk06 at amalar.com <junk06 at amalar.com> wrote:

>> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone mentioned recently.
>> Anyone have theories as to why so many coincidences fill the series?

> I have two.
> 
> 1. I'm pretty sure Wolfe is an admirer of Dickens. Dickens's plots are
> utterly coincidence-driven. (E.g., the fellow who catches Oliver, but
> not the Dodger, turns out to be his grandfather...) This doesn't bother
> his fans.
> 
> 2. These are all signs of Divine Providence (or the guidance of the
> Hier*s, aqastors, etc.) to make sure that Severian fulfills that destiny
> (of which he already had some presentiment)

I would also suggest that it serves to make the narrative seem dream-like.


  // Jesper

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### don doggett
*20 Aug 2006, 05:05 · in reply to Jesper Svedberg*

An even simpler explanation is that the narrative is
written in the first person - It is essentially a
fictional memoir. In "real life" Sev surely meets
plenty of shmoes not worth mentioning. That's why he
doesn't mention them. It's selective recording, and
because Severian is being selective, it is probable
that he (the character, not Wolfe, though Wolfe also
of course) is trying to communicate something
indirectly. What that is is up for what is apparently
eternal debate. :)

Don

> --- Jesper Svedberg <jsvedberg at gmail.com> wrote:
> 2006/8/19, Dan'l Danehy-Oakes <danldo at gmail.com>:

>> On 8/19/06, junk06 at amalar.com <junk06 at amalar.com>
>> wrote:

>>> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone
>>> mentioned recently.
>>> Anyone have theories as to why so many
>>> coincidences fill the series?

>> I have two.
>> 
>> 1. I'm pretty sure Wolfe is an admirer of Dickens.

> Dickens's plots are
> utterly coincidence-driven. (E.g., the fellow who
> catches Oliver, but
> not the Dodger, turns out to be his
> grandfather...) This doesn't bother
> his fans.

>> 2. These are all signs of Divine Providence (or
>> the guidance of the
>> Hier*s, aqastors, etc.) to make sure that Severian
>> fulfills that destiny
>> (of which he already had some presentiment)

> I would also suggest that it serves to make the
> narrative seem dream-like.
> 
> 
>   // Jesper
> _______________________________________________

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### don doggett
*20 Aug 2006, 05:15 · in reply to don doggett*

It's worth mentioning that this sort of synchronicity
doesn't happen nearly as much in the Long Sun books,
which are third person, twice as long, and more -
what's the word?- pictorial?
Then when we return to a first person style with Short
Sun, everything becomes claustrophobic and intimate
again. imo, fwiw, lol, etc.

Don

> --- don doggett <kingwukong at yahoo.com> wrote:
> An even simpler explanation is that the narrative is
> written in the first person - It is essentially a
> fictional memoir. In "real life" Sev surely meets
> plenty of shmoes not worth mentioning. That's why he
> doesn't mention them. It's selective recording, and
> because Severian is being selective, it is probable
> that he (the character, not Wolfe, though Wolfe also
> of course) is trying to communicate something
> indirectly. What that is is up for what is
> apparently
> eternal debate. :)
> 
> Don
> 
> --- Jesper Svedberg <jsvedberg at gmail.com> wrote:

>> 2006/8/19, Dan'l Danehy-Oakes <danldo at gmail.com>:

>>> On 8/19/06, junk06 at amalar.com
>>> <junk06 at amalar.com>
>>> wrote:

>>>> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone
>>>> mentioned recently.
>>>> Anyone have theories as to why so many
>>>> coincidences fill the series?

>>> I have two.
>>> 
>>> 1. I'm pretty sure Wolfe is an admirer of
>>> Dickens.

>> Dickens's plots are
>> utterly coincidence-driven. (E.g., the fellow
>> who
>> catches Oliver, but
>> not the Dodger, turns out to be his
>> grandfather...) This doesn't bother
>> his fans.

>>> 2. These are all signs of Divine Providence (or
>>> the guidance of the
>>> Hier*s, aqastors, etc.) to make sure that
>>> Severian
>>> fulfills that destiny
>>> (of which he already had some presentiment)

>> I would also suggest that it serves to make the
>> narrative seem dream-like.
>> 
>> 
>>   // Jesper
>> _______________________________________________

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### Adam Thornton
*20 Aug 2006, 05:35 · in reply to junk06 at amalar.com*

> On Aug 19, 2006, at 2:16 PM, junk06 at amalar.com wrote:
> I'm rereading (started with BOTNS this time, then back to Shadow).
> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone mentioned recently.  
> Anyone
> have theories as to why so many coincidences fill the series?

Perhaps Severian has been back and forth through time and  
reincarnated so many different ways that, actually, Every Single  
Person On Urth is one Severian or another.

We are all Severian!

Adam

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### Bob Miller
*20 Aug 2006, 09:23 · in reply to don doggett*

Well, we do know that this type of synchronicity does happen irl as well.  
The most obvious example I rememberis Winston Churchill's memoir of how he 
got into Sandhurst.  When he was taking the entry tests, 19th century of 
course, the applicant had to fill in a map of One of the "countries" 
(colonies?) of the British Empire--random and almost always different each 
year.  The future Sir Winston wrote the names of all applicants on little 
pieces of paper and drew one at random from a hat.  Divine Providence?  Or 
Fortuna's action?  I know what my opinion is. And this is the kind of thing 
Wolfe would know and use.

It's worth mentioning that this sort of synchronicity
doesn't happen nearly as much in the Long Sun books,
which are third person, twice as long, and more -
what's the word?- pictorial?
Then when we return to a first person style with Short
Sun, everything becomes claustrophobic and intimate
again. imo, fwiw, lol, etc.

Don

> --- don doggett <kingwukong at yahoo.com> wrote:
> An even simpler explanation is that the narrative is
> written in the first person - It is essentially a
> fictional memoir. In "real life" Sev surely meets
> plenty of shmoes not worth mentioning. That's why he
> doesn't mention them. It's selective recording, and
> because Severian is being selective, it is probable
> that he (the character, not Wolfe, though Wolfe also
> of course) is trying to communicate something
> indirectly. What that is is up for what is
> apparently
> eternal debate. :)
> 
> Don
> 
> --- Jesper Svedberg <jsvedberg at gmail.com> wrote:

>> 2006/8/19, Dan'l Danehy-Oakes <danldo at gmail.com>:

>>> On 8/19/06, junk06 at amalar.com
>>> <junk06 at amalar.com>
>>> wrote:

>>>> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone
>>>> mentioned recently.
>>>> Anyone have theories as to why so many
>>>> coincidences fill the series?

>>> I have two.
>>> 
>>> 1. I'm pretty sure Wolfe is an admirer of
>>> Dickens.

>> Dickens's plots are
>> utterly coincidence-driven. (E.g., the fellow
>> who
>> catches Oliver, but
>> not the Dodger, turns out to be his
>> grandfather...) This doesn't bother
>> his fans.

>>> 2. These are all signs of Divine Providence (or
>>> the guidance of the
>>> Hier*s, aqastors, etc.) to make sure that
>>> Severian
>>> fulfills that destiny
>>> (of which he already had some presentiment)

>> I would also suggest that it serves to make the
>> narrative seem dream-like.
>> 
>> 
>>   // Jesper
>> _______________________________________________

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### Bob Miller
*20 Aug 2006, 09:29 · in reply to Dan'l Danehy-Oakes*

My own is that life is also full of these "coincidences", the result of a 
possibly ham-handed Divine Providence. i.e., life and history are full of 
incidents of such incredibly low probability that
"no author would dare" use them.

> On 8/19/06, junk06 at amalar.com <junk06 at amalar.com> wrote:
> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone mentioned recently.
> Anyone have theories as to why so many coincidences fill the series?

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### Tony Ellis
*20 Aug 2006, 15:16 · follows Bob Miller*

> Junk06 wrote:
> Why? It smells of ham handedness, as someone mentioned recently.
> Anyone have theories as to why so many coincidences fill the series?

And Bob Miller:

> life is also full of these "coincidences", the result of a 
> possibly ham-handed Divine Providence. i.e., life and history are full
> of 
> incidents of such incredibly low probability that
> "no author would dare" use them.

Absolutely. Wolfe uses synchronicity because it's realistic. 

As Dan'l says, Wolfe is a Dickens fan and Dickens put a lot of
coincidence in his novels - but *why* did Dickens do that? Because that
was how he saw the real world. A crazy place where unlikely things
happened all the time. I suspect that Wolfe, who ended up married to the
little girl who once lived next door, has a similar world-view.

In any event, while the modern convention in novel-writing is to shun
coincidence like the plague, it really is just that: a convention. And
if there's one thing Wolfe enjoys in his writing, it's flaunting those.

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### Tristan Davenport
*20 Aug 2006, 17:50 · in reply to Tony Ellis*

> Absolutely. Wolfe uses synchronicity because it's realistic.
> 
> As Dan'l says, Wolfe is a Dickens fan and Dickens put a lot of
> coincidence in his novels - but *why* did Dickens do that? Because that
> was how he saw the real world. A crazy place where unlikely things
> happened all the time. I suspect that Wolfe, who ended up married to the
> little girl who once lived next door, has a similar world-view.
> 
> In any event, while the modern convention in novel-writing is to shun
> coincidence like the plague, it really is just that: a convention. And
> if there's one thing Wolfe enjoys in his writing, it's flaunting those.

It may be that Wolfe is following a genre convention rather than flaunting a 
mainstream one.  One of the pearls of wisdom I obtained from the Clarion 
writer's workshop was a rule that coincidence can propel a plot, but not 
resolve one.  Having read about a quarter of Wolfe's ouevre, I'd say his 
writing is pretty consistent with this rule.  (e.g. Sev can stumble upon 
Vodalus in the cemetary, but when he eats the previous autarch's brains, 
he's gotta want it.)

Then again, I've only read about a quarter, or less, of Wolfe's work.  
There's plenty of room still for him to flaunt that convention as well.

                             Tristan Davenport
                             tristan_davenport at hotmail.com

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### junk06 at amalar.com
*20 Aug 2006, 20:25 · follows Tristan Davenport*

> From: "Dan'l Danehy-Oakes" <danldo at gmail.com>
> 1. I'm pretty sure Wolfe is an admirer of Dickens. Dickens's plots are
> utterly coincidence-driven. (E.g., the fellow who catches Oliver, but
> not the Dodger, turns out to be his grandfather...) This doesn't bother
> his fans.
> 
> 2. These are all signs of Divine Providence (or the guidance of the
> Hier*s, aqastors, etc.) to make sure that Severian fulfills that destiny
> (of which he already had some presentiment)

> From: "Jesper Svedberg" <jsvedberg at gmail.com>
> I would also suggest that it serves to make the narrative seem dream-like.

I would agree it's probably a literary device, and that it definitely gives 
the mood that something very strange is going on. However, I have a theory 
along the lines of Divine Providence.

I like to think the coincidences are a side effect of the time manipulation 
on Severian's behalf that is contrary to the natural flow of time. This 
produces some sort of disturbance in time, causing people to get caught 
into the disturbance, like swirling around in the eddies of a river.

Even the hierodules often seem surprised to see him. It's like they are 
walking merrily through time and and now and then..."Look, it's that guy 
again!"

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### Jeff Wilson
*21 Aug 2006, 04:20 · in reply to junk06 at amalar.com*

> junk06 at amalar.com wrote:
> It's not just relatives. Even as the narrator keeps mentioning how 
> incomprehensibly populated Nessus is, he keeps running into people he 
> knows. He even runs into people he knows out in the wilderness sometimes. 
> Synchronicity abounds.

My impression is that Nessus is underpopulated, with five standing 
buildings per inhabitant.

> Meets man in library, meets same man years later racing down a street.
> Meets man digging a grave, meets same man years later in a boat.
> Has childhood friend, meets him again years later in the middle of a vast 
> ocean.
> Meets man in library, meets him years later in another library across the 
> country.
> etc etc etc for probably a dozen more examples

The Eata conincidence I'll give you, but the others you likst are hardly 
that. My impression of the time passing is also much shorter for the 
rest; Thecla's imprisonment might be a year long, and Severian's exile 
seems barely to last the summer. It makes sense to me for Racho to be 
stationed near the citadel, for Hildegrin to continue his resurrection 
business in the corpse-rich area of Nessus, and to meet a library 
janitor elsewhere in the same library.

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