# Gonna keep up w/ random comments on HOME FIRES in progress *The Urth list — 1 messages, 1 voices, 19 Aug 2013* > Exported from an unofficial mirror of a public mailing list. Copyright > in each message remains with the person who wrote it. > Email addresses are obscured as `user at host`, the form the original > archive published. This file was rebuilt from parsed fields rather than > retained headers, so it is faithful in content but not byte-exact. --- ### Brian Doherty *19 Aug 2013, 19:37* Mostly about things that I think are not working. 1) that whole "suicide club" thing---did it come out of nowhere in a confusing way, or was it properly (or even with Wolfean "I'm only telling you once) set up? And I imagine there is a very clever way it "fits" with the world he's building here, but I'm afraid I'll need a clever commenter to spell it out for me. 2) Wow, was the search for "Jerry's room" drawn out unnecessarily, or so it so far seems. I'm just up to the scene when Skip and co. finally reach it and shots ring out. Brian Doherty ---