Seven American Nights Time Gaps

Dave Tallman · 08 May 2008, 11:50 · from 2008-May.txt.gz

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From: davetallman at msn.com (Dave Tallman)
Date: Thu, 08 May 2008 05:50:38 -0600
Subject: (urth)  Seven American Nights Time Gaps
Message-ID: <4822E90E.4030009 at gmail.com>

Since I proposed my own theory for the supposed "missing night" in SAN, 
I should address some of the other theories. They are full of excellent 
analyses, but in the end I decided that I couldn't agree with them.

Peter Cash (posting on August 22, 1997) finds eight nights or more. His 
gap point is almost the same as mine (the second day does not include 
the trip to the ruins and the theater), but he uses Nadan's emotional 
state to find more:
> No. On the second day, he ambles around the North of the city, gradually
> coming to realize how deformed the Americans are. The crucial thing is
> that the "fear" passage cannot have been written any earlier than the
> third day. This is because he speaks of the fear as coming on him the
> previous day. This cannot have been on the first day--the day of his
> arrival--for his narrative of that day is clearly upbeat. It may have
> been on the second day, which ends with his realization that the
> Americans are more deformed than he had thought. There may even be one
> or more entire days missing here; there's no way to tell. But one thing
> is sure: the "fear" passage _cannot_ have been written earlier than the
> third day. Everything follows from this.
Nadan is capable of concealing his feelings from the reader. "In 
recording these several pages I have managed to restrain my enthusiasm." 
How "upbeat" is that first chapter, really? By the end of it Nadan has 
made an enemy in Mr. Tallman, a man with local connections, wealthy 
enough to afford first-class travel. He has reason to begin to feel 
uneasy, along with whatever strange things he sees on arrival in the 
port. But he started writing with the idea that he would show the 
journal to his mother and Yasmine, so he's deliberately upbeat: 
"America! America! Dull days are no more!" By the next evening he's so 
fearful that he changes his mind about letting Yasmin read it and puts 
down his true feelings. If the arrival day was entirely happy, why does 
he imagine he was drugged on the ship, rather than by something he ate 
after getting to shore?

Robert Borski, writing on May 6, 2002 has a very clever theory about the 
missing day being caused by excision of pages. That could work for my 
theory too, because the account around evening 2 is very choppy, cutting 
from a description of going out from the hotel to the late-night fear 
passage. It would be reasonable for Nadan to have some material about 
his art-stealing mission early on in his journal.

Borski gives reasons for his later interpolation point:
> Ardis, in turn, then asks Bobby, "Was it very bad?" To which the actor
> responds, "It was frightening, that's all. I thought I'd never get out." But
> if he was arrested late the night before, and released the following day,
> perhaps being confined, at the most, 16 hours, this hardly seems to warrant
> a comment about never getting out. In addition, when Bobby says, "I hear you
> missed me last night," Ardis responds, "God, yes." But if Bobby has actually
> been confined in jail for a day-and-a-half, Ardis may well be commenting on
> the poor performance of his stand-in (the fact that Bobby has been missed by
> her is obviously communicated by someone else). A longer period of
> confinement also allows more time for Bobby to rue his imprisonment and
> recover from his beating, as well as for the police department to do the
> necessary papershuffling involved with his release. But because Nadan's
> journal is now missing his account of the Gallery visit--the second day of
> Bobby's confinement--he can never directly mention how long the actor has
> been incarcerated.
I think the dialog is well-explained by the original text. Sixteen hours 
under the harsh treatment of the police is more than enough for Bobby to 
worry that he would never get out. As for the "I hear you missed me last 
night" referring to the poor performance of a stand-in, that happened: 
"Bill -- someone you don't know -- tried to go on for him in the third 
act tonight. It was just ghastly."

The quick release of Bobby can be explained in my theory. The F.E.D. was 
already interested in Nadan when he went to their offices. They used the 
time he was tied up by the bureaucracy to  search his room. No wonder it 
seemed like a "solemn ritual of deception"  to Nadan. Once they had what 
they wanted they pulled the necessary strings to free Bobby.

There is one more theory of Robert Borski I'd like to address -- the 
idea that Ardis had a burn scar between her breasts, revealing that she 
was the werewolf Nadan tried to kill. If the description of that scene 
were real and not forged, I agree that would be the inescapable 
conclusion. But it's too neat. It would mean that Ardis was a 
full-fledged (or full-furred) morph-with-the-full-moon werewolf.  The 
origin of such a creature could only be magical, not genetic damage 
caused by eating food laced with growth hormones.

I believe the creature that attacked Nadan was a mutated human; it 
always looked the way he saw it. The beggar in the ruins described them: 
"We sleep here, to be shut behind strong walls from the things that come 
at night."

The reader of the forged account is supposed to believe that Nadan, 
despondent over having loved a werewolf and possibly crazed by the 
drugged egg, has set out alone for the interior of America. I believe he 
was captured and killed by the F.E.D. instead.

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