"Hour of Trust" and evolution

I must also be at fault: I thought I was using "evolve" as "change from one state to another state." I then qualified it as being good or bad with regard to human institutions such as War and Slavery (which change for good and bad; which can be replaced with new institutions that are better or old institutions that are worse). Your use seems to be shorthand for "to the victor goes the spoils," which is very "ends" oriented but with no clear parameters on what constitutes victory, or time frame, or scale. My examples from history were addressing these angles: military short term, genetic long term (since you brought up the whole reproductive issue), cultural long term (i.e., a given civilization, as distinct from general human civilization). A broken bottle as a weapon can win a bar-room brawl, after all, but seems ineffective at larger scale/longer term struggles of will involving more than mere bloodshed.

Yes. Then again, a willingness to die on command is not a guarantee of victory. The medieval assassins would die on command and were getting along pretty well controlling the Islamic world in a behind the scenes sort of way, until those Mongols came along with overwhelming force and pretty much wiped them out. But back to the story. Right, and after the warriors (a minority of most populations) have fought the fight out of their system, the vast majority of the population will get on with their lives under whatever regime is on top. Probably including members of the old empire. The fatcats just "convert," saying something like "There is no ken but ken and groovy is the ken of ken," and whambang, they get all the real "reproductive" nookie they want. (Eeuww!) These kamikaze huggers are the pawns, match-heads used by the rebels for the political statement you say. Personally they are all saying something different (which has nothing to do with the rebel cause), but it is being channeled and manipulated by the leaders, the leaders who are not and never will Flame On. Or is this, in fact, your larger point? That my sticking point of the story, my sense that it makes no sense for Clio to kamikaze when she is worth more alive and in place--are you telling me that Clio is a leader and yes, she is ready, willing, and finally able to kill even one corporate stooge with a suicide bomb? That this, finally, is the point of transcendent evolution I have not yet understood? =mantis= Sirius Fiction booklets on Gene Wolfe, John Crowley http://www.siriusfiction.com/

So the short form would be to say: "The signature phrase 'hour of trust' applies equally to both the corporate and the rebel forces, not just the corporate forces as one might believe after following the viewpoint character." =mantis= Sirius Fiction booklets on Gene Wolfe, John Crowley http://www.siriusfiction.com/

No, no! The losing side fails because they are decadent, corrupt, and bungling; they lack the creative vision, and only lead through dominance, manipulation, and coercion, rather than leading by example. (Then again, if the corporate civilization is as terminal as it seems to be, then any attempt at "leading by example" would actually be ineffective martyrdom--that is, like those clerks with rifles dying on the ground. In contrast to the ragtag group of slaves and boys who saved Rome from Hannibal: at that stage, the civilization was still vigorous, even withstanding the scorched earth campaign of a different civilization.) The "hour of trust" for the corporate side was to be the telecast of a clean victory as a starting point for a drumming up of support for US (the corp, if not the United States itself). With a "we all hang together or we all hang alone" on the side. The betrayal you talk about is at the more personal level. At a level beyond Peters, the betrayal would appear to be (if I follow this reading correctly) actually a stunning coup-de-grace. Flaming Peters walks into the next room, where the "distant from the war" party-goers as well as the all-seeing telescreen can witness. Now =this= is true "Old Man of the Mountain" assassin style: intimidate the leaders with a spectacular example (they don't want to kill leaders unless they prove intractable). Suddenly they are on notice that they have long been infiltrated--chaos and paranoia ensue throughout the fomerly impregnable redoubt. With this in mind, Clio was programmed to flame on this day--Peters was chosen by Clio, not because he represents some corporation saviour-in-the-rough (which I find hard to believe, as I mentioned before), but he simply was the best candidate at that time and place. And, since he has these anti-revolution attitudes, all the better to remove him, if that is really a factor at all. That is: the large-scale message is not killing Peters, the message is showing the fat cats and the viewers back home the high degree of infiltration that exists, and thus the effective end of the conflict. (You continue to use your "evolution for the winners" term, but I have yet to see what you might term "change used by the side which ultimately lost against the winners." After all, they have not been static in any way: they have changed in ways which, under testing, have not been successful against their human opponants.) =mantis=