"Tracking Song" Underground
alga,
The underground sequence with the robots and Mantru bothers me, too. One way out of it, a tortuous one I admit, is to say that the narrator has become a man, just as the riders of the sleigh have become angels, and the robots obey him for that reason.
Didn't the story first appear in an anthology called After Man? I think that in the literal, DNA sense there are no humans in the story. The angels are post-human, the narrator is just-human, Mantru is a-human, and the various humanlike animals are pre-human.
I'll have to spend some more time with the story, though, before I'm sure, but it just feels right to me.
Looked at in purely stfnal terms, it's a venerable trope. When humans leave the earth, literally or figuratively, the inheritors are often dogs. Think of Simak's City, Anderson's Brain Wave, Smith's Underpeople (not exactly inheritors), and so on.
As for writing it up, hmm, for whom? NYRSF?
-viz
(david_lebling at avid.com)