The ending (was Re: (whorl) Not the Torah, but Torah-like)Whorl

But the ending voyage doesn't "work on beyond the page." We've never seen Silk qua Silk with any of the other passengers (except Oreb), and the others are all strangers to each other, so we have no idea what will become of this ill-assorted bunch. And, to be frank, I don't particularly care. To compare it with ENGINE SUMMER, a comparison mantis made (though apparently he didn't mean by it what I took him to): in ES also, the protagonist's story is not resolved in the sense we had expected it to be; instead, a sudden twist of events abruptly "closes off" the protagonist's story. But in ES the resolution worked, and I didn't feel cheated, because it was emotionally moving and thematically resonant. Neither of these things are true of the ending voyage in RttW.

In your list of motives, you don't explain why Silk wants to leave, or why he has to leave so quickly. Aside from this, I think alga's basic complaint is not that the characters aren't motivated, it's that the hasty departure fails to resolve any of the narrative threads that have been left dangling. A couple of minor points on the ending, while we're at it: 1) If, as you've argued, the inhumi mobbed the wedding to kill "Horn" and anyone whom he might have told the secret to, then Silk and Nettle's plan to use Pajarocu as their point of departure might not be that great an idea. 2) To put Nettle on a small boat for weeks with a woman who, in Daisy's words, "trusted only 'Father,' and would have put her long knife into any other person as readily as I would gut a fish" (411) seems to be asking for trouble. Isn't being nearly murdered by a rival once enough for Nettle? --Adam *This is WHORL, for discussion of Gene Wolfe's Book of the Long Sun.

Adam hath writ:

No, it doesn't. New Viron, however, does; and so does the Whorl. We haven't a clue what happens to the crewly mot that set off from NV (well, as you point out, we do in fact have a rather ugly clue), but we have a ramifying sense of the futures of the colonists. Horn set out on a quest to save the colony: he succeeded. He thought he was going to save them spiritually by finding Silk; he was wrong. He saved them physically by bringing back the corn (which is all they really wanted anyway). Which ramifies backwards toward the way Silk thought he was supposed to save his manteion (and, as we learned, failed in the long run), as opposed to they way he was actually supposed to save it (and succeeded).

Because he simply doesn't belong there?

As I've pointed out repeatedly, this is far from established, and at least some evidence points to the idea that he doesn't leave all that quickly. The events prior to the Bloody Wedding don't leave time for Nettle to have read the Narr's manuscript, but we know from one of the editorial asides in OBW that she has. I suspect that her having read it is one of the things that prompts her to accompany the Narr on his journey. Perhaps an actual statement of how long it was between the wedding and the departure would have been nice, but we know perfectly well that Mr Wolfe doesn't like to tell what he can hint at.

Big Ouch. I haven't worked out the inhumi's motives for the attack yet -- I've only read RttW once, and my copy is out on loan -- but you're certainly right on an "if" basis.

Again, ouch. I hadn't even considered that. Perhaps the Narr is overestimating his Silkish ability to bring peace... *This is WHORL, for discussion of Gene Wolfe's Book of the Long Sun.

But, as I've pointed out, we do have an actual statement, and it doesn't fit your scenario. Daisy tells us that when she saw Silk for the last time, the wedding was "a few days ago," (410) and Silk tells her they are leaving that night (411). If we need to allow more time for Nettle to read the manuscript (and I'm not convinced we do), it must come between her arrival in New Viron for the wedding and the wedding, not after the wedding. --Adam *This is WHORL, for discussion of Gene Wolfe's Book of the Long Sun.