IGJ Thoughts [editing of Horn's book]Whorl

In MESSAGE whorl.v011.n012.8 From: Jim Jordan <jbjordan at gnt.net> Subject: IGJ Thoughts Date: Wed, 09 Aug 2000 11:14:14 -0500 A few thoughts. [snip] 7. Horn's narrative is so disjointed, compared to the Book of Silk that Nettle edited, that I think Horn never makes it home. His book remains unedited. Sad to think. Hope I'm wrong.... I think it was edited, at least read by his family, since in OBW there are annotations by Hide or Hoof saying that Nettle has read it. Don't remember the page number though. Chris ----- Christopher D. Hall Aerospace and Ocean Engineering Virginia Tech Blacksburg, VA 24061-0203 (540) 231-2314 (540) 231-9632 (FAX) http://www.aoe.vt.edu/~chall *This is WHORL, for discussion of Gene Wolfe's Book of the Long Sun.